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Daddy
Contributed by
blessedangel
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Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 08:42:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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DADDY
I never had a daddy,
No one to take me in their arms and tell me it's alright,
There was never anyone there to comfort me,
When I was scared at night.
No one to watch over me,
To make sure I turned out okay,
No one to take my hand,
And guide me when I lost my way.
Mummy, I'm sorry,
But you never seemed to care,
And although I never had a daddy,
He wasn't the only one not there.
You weren't there for comfort,
When I felt I needed to be held,
You were always working or out with guys,
So I was left all by myself.
So where did this all leave me?
I was depressed and only fifteen,
I needed a daddy with me,
But to you mum what did that mean?
Well mum, I'd take my bets on nothing,
And mum hey I wasn't alright,
I needed a daddy to be with me,
So I wouldn't have killed myself tonight.
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Re: Daddy
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by Gunda on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 09:24:17 AM AEST
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I really liked your poem! The way you expressed the feelings really got me. And now I sit here woth tears in my eyes and a big lump in my belly. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Daddy
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by enigma on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:12:20 AM AEST
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...you captured the pathos...I felt it...someday, I'll post my poem, Consumed By the Worms...emotional pain is far, far beyond physical pain...
Thanks for immortalizing that precious little girl...
blessings,
enigma...ron |
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Re: Daddy
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by Whisper on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:03:03 PM AEST
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Good write. I could feel the emotion the flow was good and kept rite up to the end. Excellent Thanks for sharing
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Re: Daddy
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by crazy on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:11:29 PM AEST
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wow thats so sad that happened to my friend they killed themselves because they thought noone cared but i miss um everyday i feel for this young girl if it is a true story
so much emotion was put into this poem i loved it nice job |
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