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To be Unnoticed
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:04:10 AM in AEST
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How could you know what it feels like?
To be unnoticed
A girl with your eyes and smile
How could you know what it feels like?
To be alone
With all your charms and soul
I can never see you without a friend
Never see you alone in the end
How could you know what it is like?
To be mistreated
Is this world really all that bad?
I am hopeful that it's not
Because I could never see you hurt
It would just hurt me too much
And fill me with disappointment
I have earned my scars and I wear them well
I will never let you wear your tears
I promise to
Steal them from you any way I can
Or catch them as the fall from your eyes
I would take all the worlds stone for you
I can take them better than any one
I am already use to it
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Re: To be Unnoticed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:12:08 AM AEST
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| and so once again you have captured are every singel emotion and shown us wnat it is like to be truly human. Great job, but now I must leave....ORPHEUS GOOOO!!!!!! |
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Re: To be Unnoticed
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by Lin54 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 07:22:22 AM AEST
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Interesting words--loneliness--protection--compassion!!!
Good poem!
Linda |
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Re: To be Unnoticed
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by brew on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 08:16:38 AM AEST
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Loneliness
But penned with deep passion, and compassionate words.......
Saddness
Yet, a simple type.
Would take for another.!
Loved the write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: To be Unnoticed
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by Kazzy1231 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 12:07:22 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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Re: To be Unnoticed
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by Whisper on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:07:48 PM AEST
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Wow I enjoyed this write. Liked to read a bit more .Thanks for sharing
Whisper |
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