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We Are But Two
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:32:10 PM in AEST
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We are but two and just as deep
through Death's untroubled night;
we are but two so let us keep
the link that binds us tight.
From heart to heart, that sacred flood
that warms us is the same...
..a good ole boy, his honest blood,
alike I fondly claim.
Both within a Mother's womb-
long be her love repaid;
in the same cradle we were rocked,
'round the same tree we played.
Shortcomings and graces, though not the same,
each little joy and woe;
let Manhood keep alive the flame
lit up so long ago.
Shoulder to shoulder let us stand
eternally by and by...
..we are but two-
be that the band
to hold us 'till we die.
...love you Bro..
Billy
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Re: We Are But Two
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:34:16 PM AEST
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Dedicated to my brother Paul.. AKA "wizard"
...a great Man-
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Re: We Are But Two
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:38:07 PM AEST
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Awww Billy....a finer tribute has never been paid to a brother... This is a wonderful gesture...one I'm sure Paul will appreciate and treasure always...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:45:38 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, dedication. Yes, stick with your brother. I told my two sons, too stick together, they are all they have. Just the two of them. Its nice to see brothers love one another. This is very touching Billy, ty. Show this poem to him. Your mother raised the two of you up properly, with love.
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Re: We Are But Two
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:54:22 PM AEST
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awe........billy how simply touching ! This was a beautiful
dedication and so well penned. Heartfelt through
and through. Lucky are you to have each other.
Again, your words, so meticulously woven have
touched me. Truly.
Love and stuff
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Re: We Are But Two
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:56:00 PM AEST
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Well, how can I not like this?? Lucky Wiz to have such a good write dedicated to him! I said it before, and I'll say it again...
you two are blessed to have such a deep bond, that has stood the test of time. Nice tribute Billy.
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Re: We Are But Two
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by brew on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 08:21:21 AM AEST
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To have a brother that is a sweet guy, through and through..and now a write for him.
Keep the good feelings forever. You only have ONE brother........and thats something special.! This was a lovely sentiment, from deep in the heart. Seems both are truly special .ppl.!
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Re: We Are But Two
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by wizard on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:35:55 AM AEST
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hey bro...shat can i say, i'm truly honored.
and i ditto your remarks.
Shoulder to shoulder let us stand
eternally by and by...
..we are but two-
be that the band
to hold us 'till we die.
great write.
your loving brother...wiz
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Re: We Are But Two
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by wizard on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:37:32 AM AEST
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*correction*
*WHAT*...not *SHAT*
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Re: We Are But Two
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 07:59:03 PM AEST
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this was so heart warming it made me get tears ahhhhh Billy Im so happy that you have this type of relationship with your brother
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Re: We Are But Two
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:02:45 AM AEST
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You are extremely lucky to have that close bond with your brother. I have a sister and I am closer to people I have never met than to her. Blessing to you both. I think you are both great. Keep that bond strong.
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Re: We Are But Two
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:18:42 AM AEST
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How could I have missed this one. A beautifully well written dedication to your sweet brother Paul. You both are truly blessed to have each other.
As for you dearest Billy you speak from the depths of your heart with this write. A beautiful write by a wonderfully talented and gifted guy. May your strong brotherly bond last an eternity my friend.
Much love from your devoted fan,
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Re: We Are But Two
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:42:22 AM AEST
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What a nice thing to write.
awsome job.
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