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Davina
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:46:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Death before birth.
Angel in the sky.
Very young much 2 young 2 die.
In heaven above.
Night and day.
Angel in the sky.
R.I.P Davina
Copyright ©
Kazzy1231
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2005-10-20 17:46:28]
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Re: Davina
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by Cupid on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:51:34 PM AEST
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I'm sure that Davina loves you. Even though she was not able to live.
You'll have your own kids someday. I know you will.
Just keep at it, Kazzy1231.
You'd definitely be a loving mother.
Your writing friend in faith as well as poetry ; )
Cupid |
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Re: Davina
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by Kristone on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 06:40:31 PM AEST
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| I thaught that was a very touchy poem and as my first time on this web site, I am glad that your poem was the first that I have read. It is very good. |
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Re: Davina
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by Mild_Tempest on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:59:34 PM AEST
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Wow, that' was so beautiful. I'm really sorry about your baby. That shouldn't happen to such an innocent soul. I'm sorry.
-Will |
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Re: Davina
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by inoc on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:23:58 AM AEST
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A write so lovingly written for such a beautiful babe,,,
I believe someday you willl see her though she never made it in this world..
I pray that you will be a mother again...in this world as....
miracles DO happen expecially in true belief and prayer...
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart
coni take care Kazzy1231 |
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Re: Davina
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:31:34 PM AEST
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| A Beautiful Poem says it all |
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Re: Davina
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:14:38 AM AEST
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i love this poem
i like the repitition of angel in the sky |
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Re: Davina
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by RickShaw on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 11:09:18 AM AEST
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Hi Kazzy,
Really beautiful poem. Very sad losing your baby like that.Try and be strong thanks for your nice comment on my poem |
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