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Desception of the brain
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:17:13 PM in AEST
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Swelling within,
Crying within,
Nothing is what it's been
Decieving myself is a sin
How could I think eveything would be the same?
Didn't I consider that everyone would change?
I'm just going through so much pain.
I should have used my brain
I miss my best friend
I miss how it used to be
Shot to the head,
as quick as it could end
I wish i would have seen
I'm selfish to have believed,
Everyone moves on
How was I so descieved?
Now my friend is gone
Two years is a long time,
I admit I've changed too
My brain patterns not in line
I'm not a friend of mine.
Kate Ecklund
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Re: Desception of the brain
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST
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Great poem.. It was sad and very emotion filled. great poem...
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Re: Desception of the brain
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 06:08:10 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
Nothing is forever-
All things change (some for the better/some for the worse) all one can do is go onward...
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Re: Desception of the brain
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 05:04:11 PM AEST
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Okay Kate what to say about this one besides
that it was yet another emotional and heart and
heart felt write. Your writes always flow so
smooth when I read them as if you were
standing here reading it to me. Its like reading
your mind as the words flow of the page before
my eyes. I hope all is well and I hope you can
enjoy life event through all the twists and turns
and all the heart ach that it throws are way. Take
care and keep up the writes and I will read when
I have the time….Steve
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