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FAMILIAR
Contributed by
stitch
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 03:41:58 PM in AEST
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Slinking on soft paws
black fur glistening
Haven't I stroked
such satin before?
What worm writhes inside
that solid facade?
Grinning mask of integrity
dousing suspicious fears
Wind-blown spectre
surrenders his tree
And this shell of a familiar
no longer haunts me!
Copyright ©
stitch
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2005-10-20 15:41:58]
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 03:46:36 PM AEST
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Stitch!!!
I've missed your words so much! It's so great to see you posting again.
I love that first stanza, I really do. I also like the imagery (Don't I always? ;) )
I can almost see you writing Stitch.
Good write, my friend.
*hugs tons and tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:54:47 PM AEST
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Ghosts of the past depart .... familiar feelings fleeing with them ...
I find much relateable here Stitch. Remarkable words ... all of them.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:06:13 AM AEST
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Oh how that must be a huge relief!!!
Clever metaphor and very refreshing!
Nice to see you post something too! Thanks for making it worth the wait! |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 09:30:21 PM AEST
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No-on'es even tried to explain this.
I have a wild cat (formerly in a tree) surrendering to be petted. This then assumes a familiar subject, which I can't discern, unfortunatley.
I think it's communicating something - just what i'm not quite sure.
Keep writing,
N_F |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 04:53:58 AM AEST
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Things, and people, aren't always what they seem are they my friend? I am glad that you have tossed your demons aside.
VERY well said
Roses
Larry (who loves this one more than most) |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 11:06:48 AM AEST
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Oh dear Stichi!
(Embroidery :) :)
Oh yes, this poignantly penned work hits youn , -soft paws,- "Integrity" and suddenly - fa iliarity becomes deadly.
Great job~.
Thanks for sharing
Hugs
Elizabeth |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Hurretje on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 04:11:03 AM AEST
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Cleaned from inside out. Wonderful and striking piece of work.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 11:52:47 AM AEST
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i like this the line
and this shell of a familiar no longer haunts me WOW |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:17:50 PM AEST
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| Sort of went over my head but it was very interesting as well. |
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Re: FAMILIAR
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:17:51 PM AEST
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| Sort of went over my head but it was very interesting as well. |
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