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°°°Listen°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Early morning sunshine
Dances on your face
Slowly moving your hair
To see your precious face
~§~
Nothing could compair
For what the world has for you
I know that i love you
For this much is true
~§~
I kiss your face so slowly
A gentle kiss it would be
To watch your eye's move
Slowly..
Dreams for you and me...
~§~
Looking at you this moment
Wondering what you see
Hopes..
And dreams for you and me...
~§~
For i lay here and watch you sleep
Holding you close
Saying things to you
Smiles you will show
~§~
Heart beats hard
For the words I love you
How can anyone
Not love a love like this
How can anyone
Not care for you
~§~
Your special
In every way
Your special in my eyes
For this is where you will stay
With someone who cares
Just for you...
{Craig S. Meeks & OreO}
Copyright ©
OreO
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2003-01-20 15:40:00]
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:02:22 PM AEST
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| oh...this is such a beautiful poem... |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:41:44 PM AEST
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Another lovely write by two special people....
Jenni |
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:50:39 PM AEST
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| the love between the two of you shines, what a fantastic write again you share with us, thanks to the both of you |
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by Dani on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 07:34:28 PM AEST
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Have we got another YPDC internet love affair?? :D
Seriously... awesome write to the both of you!
~Dani~
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 08:07:56 PM AEST
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Dang,you both GO!!!! That was just terrific!
You guys fit like gloves your words are special!
Makes me smile! Christina |
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 08:56:46 PM AEST
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| Excellent Write, I wish you both much happiness together always:) |
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by roisin on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:51:14 PM AEST
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beautiful words...agree with other commentors that you both write very well together!
rosie |
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 12:35:58 AM AEST
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| A charming poem as beautiful as morning sunshine...Venkat |
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:48:10 AM AEST
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| hehehe ;o) great write again you two! |
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by rustygrl33 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:58:10 AM AEST
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| thats so sweet!! very good write |
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Re: °°°Listen°°°
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:14:07 PM AEST
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Great poem! I enjoyed this a lot very romantic and beautiful... is there something going on that someone did not tell me about? ;) Best luck to the both of you and keep these poems up!
Bobo (Joel) |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:54:28 PM AEST
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Wow... I'm speechless. It's too beautiful for words. I think I'm going to cry! You guys are sooo lucky for finding a love like that! You're starting to make me jealous... My time will come. But seriously, a beautiful poem...
YS |
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:48:02 AM AEST
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This is very beautiful...the love shines through
Chrissie |
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:48:13 AM AEST
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This is very beautiful...the love shines through
Chrissie |
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:06:43 AM AEST
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| Awwwwwwww. This poem is so sweet. I can tell how much you two really care for eachother. Keep up the good work. You two write beautifully together. Thanx for the great comments on my poems OreO. *S* Cynthia |
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