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used
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 01:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm not your love slave
don't expect me to wait here
whilst you misbehave
I'm tired
i'm worn and i'm torn
and i can't let this fantasy take me away
so if you're going to go
go
and if you're going to stay
stay
let that be it
no more fighting
no more paranoia fit
you taught me that holding hands
meant more then cheap words
you taught me there's a whole new world of gestures
that cannot be heard
i will practice what you teach
but you don't take to heart
the words you preach
It's all so empty now
so much swimming space for niggling doubt
now that i know it was all fake
i've got to ask myself?....
was it all just a mistake?
Copyright ©
loopylou
... [
2005-10-20 13:15:42]
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Re: used
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by je2ica3 on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:00:25 PM AEST
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| ive had that feel ive felt that way before so i hope you feel better soon trust me you will feel better soon..well nice job fixing your emotions into your poetry great write |
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Re: used
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by Mild_Tempest on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 03:10:38 PM AEST
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Great poem, I was entranced, I've been through this situation. I liked
"i will practice what you teach
but you don't take to heart
the words you preach" A lot, thanks for sharing
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