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untitled
Contributed by
mjh0813
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:53:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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its as if you dont even care
its like your never even there
you made me so happy and filled my heart
and now im slowly falling apart
why did you have to lie
whyd you have to be so great
and then turn out to be a total fake
im not gonna cry over you because your not worth my tears
you never even got rid of my fears
and to think i loved you for all those years
i thought i could count on you
that you'd be there to catch me if i fall
but you were barely there through it all
if you thought you needed me before
you just wait till i walk out that door
your gonna realize i was nothing but good to you
doing anything you asked me to
now i'll try to erase everything we had
the good and the bad
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mjh0813
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2005-10-20 09:53:16]
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Re: untitled
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:35:45 AM AEST
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Very sad :( good write :)
I'd suggest the tittle "why"
good luck :) |
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Re: untitled
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:22:03 PM AEST
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awsome write!! i loved it!! you expressed it so well and it had a really great flow..my favorate lines: "if you thought you needed me before
you just wait till i walk out that door
your gonna realize i was nothing but good to you
doing anything you asked me to"
thats just...tellin em how it is ya know..it's just...AWSOME! it makes me throw my hand in the air and say RIGHT ON!!!! thank you for posting this. it's great!
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Re: untitled
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:53:33 AM AEST
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| great write, but where is the happines |
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