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The thing

Contributed by shaggy2468 on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:09:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In all my days I never thought that it could be true. But one mid-morning day It came, came from the great big blue.
Scared and terrified I did not know what to say. It stared at me so I stared back at its face. Back at it’s face one to make you wonder. Wonder if it is human or not of this place. Then all of a sudden there was a loud thunder and all went dark after a few minutes it was light at last. And as done so the thing was gone and stood the most beautiful woman. This woman was no ordinary girl yes to a man’s heart she was fast. But her own was deep, dark, and demented but I was no ordinary man. I to had been there before so we talked and for once we felt in the right place. And she was no longer a thing but a somebody, somebody who was loving and caring. And I want you to know that its nor the body or the face It is the heart in side the body even if it is worth staring. To care for everybody and anybody is a task every one should have. If you don’t feel that way its ok but don’t laugh. If you do I don’t care all it is, is a laugh. And if you take away my friends and family but never can take the love I have.

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Re: The thing (User Rating: 1 )
by Iesha on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 04:05:50 PM AEST
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Great write,I loved the imagery...

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