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Inspirational love
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:36:27 AM in AEST
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There is no need for me to see into heaven
For I have already seen all its beauty and splendor
And it can never compare to what I see in you
I have heard the words of god from god her self
All she told me to do is love you with all that I have in me
But she really did not have to I have from the very start
There is no need for me to think about what I want in life
I already have the most important part
The rest will all fall into place
Just like I did when I met you
You set something off in me
Deep with in and then out of me
From my hands onto this paper
Call in inspiration I can call you my muse
One that I love and love to use
One loves me and loves how I use her
You know you are the only one for me
The only one I will ever need to inspire me
In every way I do everything
I just want to be better
I can be better because of you
I can be the best I can
Just for you
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Re: Inspirational love
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:45:45 AM AEST
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The rest will all fall into place
Just like I did when I met you
awe this is so cute, i also liked the different perspective on god, how you made him a she, great write. |
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Re: Inspirational love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 12:28:38 AM AEST
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God's love shines through, beautiful write, thank you, beautiful picture you drew here. Wonderful title.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Inspirational love
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 02:00:13 AM AEST
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Wow that almost brought tears to my eyes
and I thought it was just beautiful. The last 4
lines just blew me away because it reminded
me of me and my girlfriend. Once again this
was beautiful I loved it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Inspirational love
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by imaginary on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:31:08 AM AEST
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| Aww thats a wonderful poem! I'm glad you can feel that much for someone. |
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