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Gap Blindness
Contributed by
roisin
on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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back to back they lay
she a "B" with an "itch"
he a man with the terrible need of a wife,
"her"
round rear cheeks only inches from them touching,
flushed front cheeks with eyes not seeing
the gap which runs between them.
their eyes fixed on matching blue walls
their mouths closed on secret wants and desires
neither,he nor she, knowing the true essence of the other
one wanting permanence, one wanting freedom,
solitude sad for one, solitude beauty for another
do they see the gap that runs through their lives?
no,
sad but true,
ignorance is theirs
Hey, You there
go tell them please
they suffer from gap blindness.
Copyright ©
roisin
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2003-01-20 14:40:00]
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Re: Gap Blindness
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:56:44 PM AEST
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| Gap blindness ... I like that. Interesting write .. I enjoyed this one. |
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Re: Gap Blindness
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 05:10:00 PM AEST
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| NIce write... very imaginative! well done! Larry |
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Re: Gap Blindness
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 03:34:54 PM AEST
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I've read three of your poems this evening roisin and look forward to reading more...you have much talent.
Chrissie |
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Re: Gap Blindness
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by Necronomy on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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| i like this, good job. |
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