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everything is changing
Contributed by
moon_light
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Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:00:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everything is changing.
Nothing is the same.
I don't seamtoget it.
How to play this crazy game.
Evertything is quickly falling apart.
No one cn see what is
inside my heart.
i long to let go.
These things i wish i diden't know.
My true fealings i cant show.
Everything is changing.
The world is spining around.
No matter how hard i try.
Some how i can't even.
Tuch the ground.
Just let me be.
Just let me cry.
Just let these fealings pass me by.
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moon_light
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2005-10-19 21:00:47]
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Re: everything is changing
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:49:47 PM AEST
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| Pretty good, although this might benefit from a bit of spell-checking is all. Good thoughts that I can easily relate to. |
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Re: everything is changing
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 04:31:12 PM AEST
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hey hun this one is good sad but very good well g2g love u lots hun byebye
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Re: everything is changing
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by Baby_Grl on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:15:06 PM AEST
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This is really good Jen. Need some spelling checks sis. I wish I can write good and thoughtful poems like your's than mine goes. lol. Good Job sis!
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Re: everything is changing
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by thumper on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:06:09 AM AEST
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That's life. It changes constantly and there is no instruction manual. lol It sounds like you were pretty down when you wrote this. Hey, if we didn't have moments when we are down, how will know we're happy when times are good? ;>)
Good write. Keep it up. (I don't know how I missed this one)
Peace to ya, Jen.
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