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kids in the cross firer:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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i cry when i think about what i put you through.
taking the kids,house , car
and moose.
moving away pretty far,its not that i don't care about you.
its just that i didn't know what else to do.
you drink,the house stink,kids dirty and fighting.
jim drunk and cursing,throwing bear cans and mouthing.
rick crying,no one pick him up.sue hiding,praying no one would
spank her for being there.as she watch you and him ,
in my love chair.
if you change i won't sware,
but i'll let you have the kids my dear.
how they have grown year to year,
doing good in school,even getting cheer for making the honor roll.
so if you stop your drinking dear,the children are yours forever.
they still come first even though your my wife.we pray for you day and night.
befor and after i kiss them good night.
with love your family.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-10-19 19:19:13]
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Re: kids in the cross firer:
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by TwiztidAngel on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 08:13:08 PM AEST
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Your poem is really nice, and also inspiring. But you just need to work on your spelling and your poem will be perfect.
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Re: kids in the cross firer:
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 11:00:01 PM AEST
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Good message here, Richard... It is always the kids who suffer...this is so true
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