|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
One Life
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:43:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
|
One life
that I am given
One life
I’m condemned to live in
One life
How long
Must I go on
How long
Must I belong
To this one life
Empty and eternal
I am marked infernal
One life away from death
And one day to pass the test
Lay me to rest
One life
I’m giving
One life
Condemn me to live it
Live in this filth
This decay
Live in this life
I can’t trade it away
I can’t trade it away
One life
Despise
What I can’t divide
Scrape the truth from the lies
How long
Must I belong
To this life
Lay me to rest
I can’t trade it away
Copyright ©
weepingprophet
... [
2005-10-19 18:43:57] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: One Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:48:29 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
brutally written and with some very fine lines to
emphasize it as well. Lines like " Scrape the
truth from the lies..." that's graphic and telling.
Your style is distinct and it's great to read...
Keep it up ! |
|
|
Re: One Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 11:10:22 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Excellent, the feeling is mutual. Every sentence moved me. Very articulate and well said. |
|
|
|