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Emotions on a chemical break down

Contributed by ddannyc on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:17:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Emotions on a chemical hideous
Writing in pieces for a trouble puzzled mind
These is my puzzle poem. & these are the directions .
You must start with each side separately. Then combine left to right At the end read
Read again combining right to left.
Then anyway you please

(Me) (her)
A hole in the dam………………………………No remorse
With no direction ………………………………Rushing to gather
Flooding the domain …………………once relied on the nourishment
Walls breaking free…………….horror fills the eyes of the on looker
Flee for shelter……………………………….....You cant swim
Leave………………………………...................Now flowing in old paths
You have no option …………………………….consuming all hope
There are no channels ………………………….lying in the shadows
Clearing everything …………………………….into the abyss
All I see is soil ground and destruction ………..The standards raise
Flaws over looked ………………………………In reckless abandon
From rushed construction ………………………Time can heal
Surch for fault ………………………………......words gather like clouds
But the emptiness overwhelms …………………A selfish glance
Realizing the volume …………………………..That’s been released
Fault foundation ………………………………...Must prevent the past
Throe and precise……………………………….at all coast
I rebuild with the sands of time………….rain clouds and regrets
Rain will come……………………………….......to many lies
Replenishing with each cloud tell full again…….A pain full memory
Will the walls hold this time …………………….leading the way

Copyright Â© ddannyc ... [ 2005-10-19 07:17:45]
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Re: Emotions on a chemical break down (User Rating: 1 )
by ddannyc on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 04:45:29 PM AEST
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mother earth

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