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Guilty Pleasures
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:51:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Those lips so full---can't resist
have me dreaming of receiving just one kiss
Your mouth, your beautiful full smile
bite your tongue playfully, smirk, such sexy style!
Look at you! Those eyes mesmerize
they pull me close and hypnotize
Just one look from you, I could never lie
anything you want, I would never deny
Let me run my hands up your shirt
probing fingers---such a flirt!
Can I caress your chest?
Help you get undressed?
Pull you close to me...
Show you all of me...
May I lure you into bed?
I'll make true everything I said
I'll whisper seductively in your ear
while you draw my naked body near
Move in for the kill...
we won't stop till you've had your fill
Kiss me tenderly
clutch me desperately
I'll become one with you
then we'll take a breather, for a few ; )
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by brew on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:56:31 PM AEST
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*tsk *tsk...........Weeeee, You go scorp.!
What a sensual write, for one who has the heart.!
Yes, they should be "steamed" after reading that....
If not, Are they crazy?!
I hope who ever the guy is...........they know what to do and how to write, and show back.! yes, wonderful write........loved it.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:07:12 PM AEST
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lol the delayed responses are starting to make sense. Great write, very sensual, enjoyed reading it.
-Cassy |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:08:51 PM AEST
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i was a little dissaponted when i read the "not too steamy" part. but pleasantly suprised after reading it...i think i got burned ; )
and if thats not "too steamy"...i'd like to read a steamy one..lol
wizard |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:10:33 PM AEST
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tsk tsk tsk..lol..nice write Scorp. You made me smile with the ending..lol..great job..lol
~Clark |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:46:51 PM AEST
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Who's inside who's head now, lol.
Wait a minute I gotta wipe the windows. They're all fogged up for some reason, lol.
An absolutely sensaul write u have here dearest Scorp. Come on let me in on it, who is he? A great experience to read such brilliant work from the talented Scorpsta.
*hugs*
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:39:57 AM AEST
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Your womanly prowess is quite apparent in this flawless peice of tittlating poetry, heartfelt exciting and yet not quite all the way, for u r a woman who knows the art of longing and is most giving of your self, lovely peice of tender poetry, beautiful flow of emotions . . .
(((((Scorp)))))
Ben
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 01:57:07 AM AEST
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whewwwwww eeeeee I feel the temp rising.
Loved this!
Michelle |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:58:45 AM AEST
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Phew its getting HOT HOT HOT in here.
That was some kiss.
Superb
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by jheng on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:37:20 AM AEST
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| what a hot poem! hope i can also make one of those hot poems ... |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:34:56 PM AEST
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Whoa, whoa whoa, not too steamy huh? I can't even see my computer screen !! lol
very, very hot and playfully well worded. i very much
encourage you to keep it up and have fun!!!
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:44:50 PM AEST
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*fans self wildly*
Forget about lockin up your daughters!
Mothers watch out for yer sons!!! lol
good lord scorpy!! lol This was an amazing and spectacular write.
Wow and WOWEE!!! What man in his right mind could resist? lol
So sensual and sexy, you little vixen you!!
~Breezy
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 03:44:09 AM AEST
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| wooohooo scorpy you go girl.lol |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Writting_Fever on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:57:41 AM AEST
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| I like this poem, a lot! It's very very sexual, naughty, i like it! |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:54:46 AM AEST
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Haunted Pleasure, I have never known you to lie or even be inaccurate. Okay, let's analyze this statemnet for a moment please, Ladies & Gents...if you will indulge me for a few *wipes steam from computer monitor*...sorry folks, techincal difficulties....*moisture of steam ruins current monitor* *quickly replaces monitor with spare in the bedroom* *audience gasps in shock* *several people are heard saying "did he say bedroom* *more guests even run out of auditorium for their own guilt ridden "not too steamy; guilty pleasures"* eh-hem *TIMgent quickly hooks up specially protected monitor (cause we all need protection in the bedroom right)* *TIMgent finds self having difficulties too; runs through cold shower* ;-} *changes & comes back* *several other lonely audience members are seen fanning selves with program guides* *others are somewhat seen down behind seats---uh....camera quickly & smoothly cuts from that scene to retain PG rating Okay Ladies & Gents, uh, um, a few techincal difficulties there...I apologize...so where was I? Some nut from audience yells "In the shower". No, TIMgent says...that's not really what I meant...anywho.....let's analyze this statement --> "Just a flirty write, nothing too steamy" Does anyone believe this hooey? Flirty? Not "too" steamy? Flirty is winking at someone across the room or next to you or maybe gently using some subtle body language......this poem was a brilliantly engineered master piece to say the least of perfectly worded foreplay and well...uh....ew-kay!!!! I have never been disappointed in any Haunteriffic writing..one master piece after another, hooooowwwwever..... "just" a flirty write, negative on that one "nothing too steamy"....no not too steamy....that's because it was a boiler room of love & lust made with the perfection of the Oh-Haunted-One that no one else can surpass; no one can deny.....yowza!!!!!! I just don't understand the intro ;-} Haunterella....tsk...tsk..tsk....what are we gonna do with you about that? Oh...yeah, ahem......of course, allow you your privacy for those few minutes have already passed.....the breather is over and we all anxiously await in hightened anticipation for the next Scorperriffic masterpiece.....damn I gotta get a gf. *rolls eyes*
That was absolutely beyond descriptive words Score-PEN-steamer...yes, look even the pen melted....new pen please...there ya' go...buh bye. *closes door...runs away* and runs and runs and runs..... |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 04:25:16 PM AEST
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cute flirty coy playful and sexy
when a girl knows what she wants ... heh
i need not go on, huh?
GuiltY? ... nah
more like naughty
koo poem
*·.¸¸¸¸.·*arsenic
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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Wow Scorp..
..gotta love the 5th-
..so true.. in all you women do.. lol
(I'm playin of course)
Love this-
Billy |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 12:16:34 AM AEST
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Flirting or not, mature women do know what they want. Probably why those young men love the older woman, kind of smart aren't they. Whining, nagging is over, its just sheer truth, and no, lol, no's. LOL.
You should write for those steamy sillouette books, I liked this one lol. Had me smiling all the way through this... breathe in through the nose, out through the mouth, lol. Yes, I like this line a lot..
****I'll become one with you
How much closer could you get.
Written in taste, just the right amount, and not going overboard, which is nice, a peek..instead of the whole enchilada..
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Mangos on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:55:17 AM AEST
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| this was HOT...i just wonder why these pleasures, so natural and human...conjur up guilt?....regardless great write. |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by candysears on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:13:47 PM AEST
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So hot you have to wipe glasses from all the steam....lol....But is very good..
I love it....God Bless! |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:26:04 PM AEST
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| Stupid and tacky |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by ChibiMiroku on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 08:05:00 AM AEST
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Wow. Well done! "nothing too steamy", eh?
You coulda had *me* going. Wonderfully done, and I hope to see more! :D |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 10th November 2014 @ 04:23:55 AM AEST
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| Yes Yes and Yes, to all of those questions. jaw dropping and heart pounding. Damnit now I'm all revved up and nowhere to go. thanks a lot Scorp. I preread Tims comment before reading the poem, and I was all like, it can't be that sexy. I was wrong. you did this to me with another poem too. you're good at this. |
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