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Fading Faster
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:43:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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falling backwards, just another word in ryhme
as I lay my head back down, for the last and only time
seeing darkness, all I want beneath my feet
fading faster, the pain is catching up to me
transcripted message, written down in purley blood
hope they find it, send a prayer to up above
circling slowly, mangeled body lies below
in a river, where the dark, dank species go
flowing freely, no longer trailing in the dust
breathing deeply, my heart is empty; I have trust
where to go now? doesn't matter i am free
sailing softly, like a sailboat in the breeze
whisper kindly, in the ears of my old friends
tell them gently, i'll be back when caos ends
they can feel me, if they stand still long enough
they could hear me, if the listened in the rough
singing sweetly, follow voices from above
yes they call me, time to join up with love
sentance lifting, judgement passed upon me
and the moment comes, where my life flashes before me
sent to heaven, or sent to hell; the deepest pit
darkness looming, but there's light shining within it
turn the tables, for I am lost and i can't see
take the pathways..., we'll find out where they lead me
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-10-18 21:43:12]
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Re: Fading Faster
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by fredsmith on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:53:24 PM AEST
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lol sad but awsum
i like how it was writtin good work 5/5
i hope that ur ok
im havin the same problems with depression
well i hope u get betta lolz
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Re: Fading Faster
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by dalamar on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 02:31:34 PM AEST
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| very good. Keep it up. |
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Re: Fading Faster
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 04:03:26 PM AEST
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Concerta and Effexor...they don't make doses larger than what I take!
Depression ain't no fun...composing, photography and poetry were just enough distraction to keep me alive...
Keep documenting the experience...Truman's Door has got to be out there somewhere...if Jim Carey could find it, there's got to be hope for us!
blessings,
enigma...ron |
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Re: Fading Faster
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:27:42 PM AEST
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u are too good for me
*giggles* this poem is so superly duperly. i like lots. i think u are better from this sadness now, i think.
^_^ jennnny! |
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