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Meteor
Contributed by
Red_Silo
on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Censored being hardly there to see,
Just a moment and your up and gone from me.
Taken into black….taken away.
You’re one of the many last warnings we’ll see one day.
Silently, you’ll pull us down.
Wasted away, no one is found.
You’ll pave the way, clear the path….
Leaving nothing to no one to cleanse the aftermath.
Shot off the clouds of our heaven,
Which were thought to be so high.
The Earth has split with one….
Single…great….divide.
Without the distance you’d never gotten away.
Life’s fading color is all the way to grey.
Judge the distance from the ground and prey.
We’re so strong, so dumb, but all we do is look above.
You make it okay, you pave your own way.
Crippled to Earth we scatter, and you reap a higher momentum now,
You only bear down to help us reach a higher ground.
We tap our heels to fall asleep….
Awake and dreaming….we’re only sleeping….
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2003-01-20 12:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Meteor
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:41:27 PM AEST (User
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Intriguing. A very unique look at (what I perceive to be) meteoric armageddon. By the way, I wrote a prophecy on this.
4 star effort. |
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