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You're best kept secret.
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:54:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It ended before it could begin
we never were "just friends"
...now you can't blame me for hating him.
What he did was wrong
how could someone be led on so long?
I could easily feel the love deceasing
almost as soon as I saw you leaving...
so, sorry I don't feel like breathing!
You're heart said goodbye
as you held my hand
was leaving that easy?...
I just don't understand
And now I know that you wont be here
it's got me thinking, I'm alone with fear.
You love your girlfriend more
...what did you need me for?
Your tongue in my mouth
what was that all about
Your hands couldn't stop touching me
Is this the way things have to be?
You kiss my neck, you kiss my cheek
You're draining me
I feel so week.
I need to laugh but I have to cry
my feelings are strong about wanting to die.
You were fake when you looked in my eyes
stop telling me your different
you're the same as those guys.
I'll keep our secret close to my heart
nothing could save us from falling apart.
My arms around you, your hands in mine
everything hurts, I'll never be fine.
Self-inflicted harm
your name carved in my arm
I was loving you, but now you're gone.
Copyright ©
Lollypopxcore
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2005-10-18 19:54:53]
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Re: You're best kept secret.
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:05:00 PM AEST
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I like this, you wrote it well. It sucks to be caught in that situation...
Good job. =) |
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Re: You're best kept secret.
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by HAPPIE on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
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| THAT POEM IS GOOD... I LIKE IT VERY MUCH |
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Re: You're best kept secret.
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by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:51:47 PM AEST
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Good poem. sorry about it though
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Re: You're best kept secret.
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by jheng on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:46:05 AM AEST
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| such an emotional poem. felt like this before, hope you get over it soon |
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