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Deathblow
Contributed by
Minus_Blindfold
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:40:58 PM in AEST
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Always the same old sound,
Just a new mouth,
And I never knew you'd knaw at me like that,
But if you like it we can ride on a black horse,
A wild, iniquitous death horse,
I'd back you but I'd have to fade,
If I go with you I'd mutate,
Don't speak, don't say nothing,
In case we ever do meet again,
Something's wrong with you,
Well I hope we never do meet again,
I get sore when you stare with such contrast,
When you sharpen your eyes cause you're like that,
And get sick everytime you pull her back,
Pull the reigns, open mind...clean, your heart's black,
I'd back you but I would have to fade,
If I go with you I'd want to mutate.
Don't speak, don't say nothing,
In case we ever do meet again,
Something's wrong with you,
Well I hope we never do meet again,
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Re: Deathblow
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by AshRayne on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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When i read this, i think of a deeper meaning, yet i am not sure what it is. i like this poem, it makes me think. "Don't speak". i must ask, is this because you are afraid of what is to be said, or that you know what is coming? or maybe something i have not thought of...
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection
~Ash
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Re: Deathblow
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:39:42 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the comment, first of all, secondly i'd like to add that when i say "Don't Speak" I'm telling her not to pressure me into changing into what she wants me to become which is vivdly described in this poem as a totally different person then I ever intended. So basically i'm telling her to hold her tougne incase i ever see her again, in which case she might be able to see me for who i've always wanted to be! |
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