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Kisses On The Wind...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:38:59 PM in AEST
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Kisses On The Wind…
Kisses on the wind
Blown upon the breeze
Travelling through the air
Whispering through the trees
Searching for her lover
The one who fuels her fire
The one that haunts her dreams
And fills her with desire
Boys wrapt around her fingers
But none have crept inside
The one she truly craves
Lives across the great divide
Every night she’s dreaming
A kiss does leave her lips
Blown from her sweet mouth
Across her finger tips
Hoping one day to travel
Far across the blue
To find the boy who stole her heart
And make all her dreams come true
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:52:57 PM AEST
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awe ..... Susie Q and Eddy, this was positively captivating !!
So sweet and enchanting. Beautifully penned by two
very talented and special people.
*huggles*
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:14:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, true, have heard it happen, stories told.. dreams do come true, if you let them. I get the song stuck in my head now, Somewhere, over the rainbow, in this case, your write, over the ocean.. way up high, way oer there.. Beware, stay away from dreams lol. Or, if you dream, be sure you work on the right one.. lol. Pray for I should say.. even though, a fact you two, R.. STARRRRRRRZ. can't wait for the next one.. blowing a kiss atcha Sue, Eddy...
Raquel Leah :D |
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:26:41 PM AEST
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Geez...did you two go and pluck these thoughts right out of my brain? ; )
I certainly know what it's like to be this girl. I must say again; you two write so incredibly well together!
The flow and wordplay is so smooth, it's as though you embody one soul. Great job Eddy and Sue!!
Scorp. |
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:31:18 PM AEST
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Well your collaboration certainly worked out well. This is a beautiful poem. Very touching and romantic. I loved the verse and the rhyme scheme.
Well done, I really like how the title fits in with the write.
Will |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:48:36 PM AEST
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| Awww this is beautiful. I love it . Flows very well too. Great job. =) |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by brew on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:28:10 PM AEST
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Well to have what is longed for over the great cold blue.can be given, if you BELEIVE>! had a good friend, and he and she both lived in differ countries.......soon met.and BAM......lived happily so far(after 5 yrs) of total bliss.! So the write, that you have penned, can become a truth....but as Raquel said....dont just live a dream...if you want it, and it seems right....so do it.! You never know if that chance will come once again..and if you dont.who knows.! Loved the write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:29:34 PM AEST
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*Bravo to Dreamer and Kenty..*
...encore even..
Beautiful..and nurtured by both of you-
..thouroughly poetic and complete..
great rhythm...and rhyme as well-
Blessings,
B
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 02:06:17 AM AEST
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applauds the two of you loudly!
this is romantic and breath taking you work well together
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:16:16 AM AEST
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| It's 'wrapped', not 'wrapt'. |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:48:17 PM AEST
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Awww this is so beautiful.
Scott |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 01:21:37 PM AEST
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| A pleasure again Sue,,you write beautifully so it was a pleasure,,,kiss sent across the blue ,,hugs me you... |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by mylady on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 06:17:48 AM AEST
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| Very Nice .....mylady |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 12:36:58 AM AEST
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this peice is sad cause she cant be with her true love but also promising that there love will join them togeather one day heartfelt and very passionate thanks for this awsome write
huggles, kelly/aprilrose |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by ChibiMiroku on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:47:34 PM AEST
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You two work crazily together, you know that? ^^
Well done! |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by ChibiMiroku on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:16:25 PM AEST
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Very, very well done.
~But none have crept inside.....my favorite line. ^^
Great write, you two! |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Spike on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 03:17:23 AM AEST
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A nice little sojourn into the whimsical world of hopeful romance. Sigh..... makes me feel all young and optimistic again,
Spike |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by sleepykisser on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:54:15 PM AEST
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beauitful! the rhyming works so great and does not seem forced at all! i really like it
- christina |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:47:36 AM AEST
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| lovely words cant explain |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:57:33 PM AEST
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Truly, this is a very well written bit of poetry. Not many seem to care about meter and good rhyme, but you have both here in addition to a very romantic story.
Excellent my friend
Very well done
Roses and drinks
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 01:43:23 AM AEST
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Beautifully written my dear I absolutely loved
the imagery in this. Thanks for sharing this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 03:56:01 PM AEST
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Well done, I do like this one. Filled with longing, but not much sadness.
Take crae.
David |
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:18:40 PM AEST
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very well done dreamy write
NS |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:25:32 AM AEST
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| Your writing is just incredible. I just love the way you write. It is so inspiring...Mike |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by moses on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 05:01:52 PM AEST
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first of all i have to say i love all the work that you do. I admire ur ability to write poetry and find it all very inspiring. I'd like to comment on everyone of ur poems and maybe at somepoint i'll actually come close but for now ill tell you again to:
keep up the amazingness,
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:11:32 PM AEST
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This flows beautifully, and has a sweetness along with a romantic mysteriousness to it!
Hugs LG |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by bigduck6769 on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:17:51 PM AEST
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you are very eloquent in your writings..
i am refreshed everytime i read one of your great poems..
=]
--ryan |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 07:30:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful sue, a poem of desire and emotions carried on the winds of longing
and in the heart of magical thought and persuasion. a most lovely duet of continuity.
((((Sue))))
Ben |
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Re: Kisses On The Wind...
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:28:53 PM AEST
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Keep them kisses coming as the wind tastes salty without them.
Blessings
AJ |
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