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Tears
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:39:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I have cried a million tears
Doubting, waiting, all these years
Lonely in my castle strong
Wondering where I belong
Went away to fight a war
Tore my heart out from it's core
Said you would return to me
Went into infinity
Tears have fallen , drop on drop
Couldn't halt them, couldn't stop
Cried a river in my time
Fall of water, joined with mine
Such a torrent, filled with pain
Taking over land again
Swirling waters circle me
I must hurry to the tree
Tree of hope is waiting here
Takes my worries, takes my fears
Wraps her boughs and holds me tight
Keeps me safe throughout this night
I awake, the sky is red
Look far at the tears I've shed
Amazement, I look out to sea
You are sailing back to me
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-10-18 16:39:47]
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Re: Tears
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by Cupid on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:50:22 PM AEST
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I absolutely LOVE the rhyme in this poem, gwenevere!
I think I can relate to all tears, because I get sad all too often.
This is a GREAT poem you have here.
Please! Keep 'em comin'! |
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Re: Tears
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:44:22 PM AEST
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A paragon of rhthym and rhyme-
Ros, when I return late to your work..
'tis ALWAYS better late then never..
I am so very glad I read this..
It is indeed like taking a deep breath..
(sometimes I take that for granted..breathing you deep that is)
I've forgotten how much I enjoy your work-
Utmost admiration to you..
and this...these words...
Sincerely,
Billy
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Re: Tears
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by brew on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:52:16 PM AEST
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Wonderful!
Well penned and well thought for all.
You have said from the heart, which lies in tears, yet happiness......
Such emotion
Such descriptive pictures
Thanks for sharing this write with all
brew~ |
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:11:56 AM AEST
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you"ve pened this with your heart and soul
and it speaks beautifuly with it's voice of
magic,a lovely combination of feelings
woven intuitivly into the imagination of the
reader, very lovely ros . . .
Ben |
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Re: Tears
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by candysears on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 05:18:38 PM AEST
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Brilliant..A star to behold...You are truly a poet
In your own right..I will read all your post..
God Bless! |
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