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jack and jill 2
Contributed by
judasman
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 12:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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jack and jill got some pills
they forced them on their daughter
her body shut down
now she's underground
while they serve time for her slaughter
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judasman
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2005-10-18 12:36:36]
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Re: jack and jill 2
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by absolutspin on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 01:01:17 PM AEST
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| maybe no one could think of how to comment on it...It's excellent...but i don't know what to say it just makes me want to ask questions...like are you talking about legally medicating children and it having fatal effects...or did some crappy people kill thier child with an overdose?...i guess it doesnt matter it holds vaild either thought...anyway enough rambling... |
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Re: jack and jill 2
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:03:57 PM AEST
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| Funny, funny... Witty, witty... |
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Re: jack and jill 2
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:27:33 PM AEST
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| lol I like that.. tis clever =) |
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Re: jack and jill 2
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by jeza on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:01:57 PM AEST
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| very clever and interesting poem i like it |
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Re: jack and jill 2
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by angryhippylibral on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:32:31 PM AEST
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It's sad. It's pretty.
I think it's true, and that makes me sick. |
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