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Will You Marry Me
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 06:02:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Picture me standing by a tree,
Body begains to shake, down on one knee,
Looking into your eyes,
Watching the tears form under a clear blue sky,
Listening to the river as it sings it's song,
Oh how I've waited for this moment for far to long,
I begain to speak but not a word comes out,
The beating of my heart is full of doubt,
Will she say yes, will she say no,
Only her and the Lord knows,
Thoughts of us fog my mind,
Should I put my heart on the line,
Will you marry me,
Can you be my wife to be,
She looked me in the eyes,
Gave me a kiss, sorry not this time.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2002-07-25 06:02:40]
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Re: Will You Marry Me
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 03:11:20 PM AEST
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Oh no! This must have hurt
so badly, this is so beautifully
written. I want to read more
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Will You Marry Me
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 04:43:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. And sad too.
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Re: Will You Marry Me
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:32:26 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem, but so sad. This must've hurt, but life will go on, and you will flourish, finding eternal happiness. Of anyone, you deserve it! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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