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Professor Penguin
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Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 01:01:27 PM in AEST
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The tell tale rasp of scuffing corduroy;
An unavoidable corrosion of inner trouser thigh,
Effortlessly drowning a soft shoe bounding,
With knowledge to impart he wanders campus
Leather features; Survivors of an eggshell blast,
Perform a showcase of eccentric ticks
Lips on inward pout, with eyebrows stable raised,
Downward tufts of nasal hair flow free in the breeze
Stubborn buttery crumbs of morning toast
Cling to the lapels of an ancient tweed,
Random splashes of a vintage port nightcap
Distort an already unfortunate polyester necktie
Smell? Of course! Like a second hand bookshop,
The one at the corner of Trafalgar Street in
Brighton to be precise - and as I recall;
Particularly famous for it’s musty penguins
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 01:22:08 PM AEST
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Terry,
This ...for some reason was soothing to me. Maybe because he seemed so familiar.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Lia on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 03:32:53 AM AEST
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| Terry!!! So nice to finally be reading your poetry again. I have a couple of new ones but haven't posted them yet. This was great. I love penguins hehe...LOL..muahhh to ya Terry!!! |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Patricia_Petro on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 07:53:30 AM AEST
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Hi Terry,
Ahhh...thanks for the "leg up." I would have been wading thru the quagmire for hours. LOVE this one. Had no doubt I would. I brilliant portrait!! Made me smile. ~Patricia |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 09:15:57 AM AEST
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An excellent portrait Terry..I love it. I only just stumbled across this in my travels! Glad I didn't miss it.
Love Chrissie xx |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 12:53:36 AM AEST
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hehehe, I think I know this guy, I looked and yes he did have the inner thigh corrosion you talk of...... ewwww!
Feelings of catweazel I get, young Terry. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Carrie on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 05:07:39 AM AEST
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| Amazing! I love this and all your blazingly image-evocative poetry. You must be a great world traveler or have a GIGANTIC imagination. What exotic places you take your readers to... it's much cheaper than airline tickets! You are a wonderful writer. I hope to God this is more than just a hobby for you. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 07:53:49 AM AEST
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Hi Terry,
Someday I'd like to visit that second hand bookshop at the corner of Trafalgar Street in Brighton . This professor is a person I'd like to meet and talk with. I think I could learn much from him.
Always,
Laurie |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by matlock on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 05:12:33 AM AEST
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| I love the style and descriptions. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by InexactExactness on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 10:38:03 AM AEST
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| Hey not bad. I must say it was quite amusing. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Fwog on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:13:57 AM AEST
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G'day Terry,
What a gift you are, this is just so brilliant,
I felt I was walking with him. I must know him.
Thank you for this. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 12:56:48 PM AEST
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| Maybe it's just me, but I'm lost. I'm sure your a great poet, I just didn't like this one. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by MoonLite on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:45:02 PM AEST
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| Wow..nice descriptions. It really paints a picture in my mind. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 03:56:48 PM AEST
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Dearest Terry @-<-<<-
Ahhh.. do so love your style as always.. this is an excellent write.. reminds me of some of my professors and brings back wonderful memories.. we can learn so much from the penguins.. love how you describe him.. charming:)
huggs & happy holidays,
always Nessa
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 02:36:41 PM AEST
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THIS IS RETARTED!!!!!!!!WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? YOUR ARMPITS STINK?!?! FOR THE LOVE OF PETE, SINCE YOU'RE GAY, GOODBYE MS.LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD, FOR CHRIST'S SAKE, EVEN THOUGH HE DOESN'T EXIST HEHE,
IM 12 MEET YOU AT THE BUS STOP TWIRP, OH YEAH YOU LIVE IN LONDON, GEEK!!!!!!! |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 09:05:57 PM AEST
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| Don't listen to that ass hole (yeah, you up above me!)...... I thought your poem was charming in a funny sort of way. I liked it. |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:00:18 PM AEST
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| This was excellant! |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by AsrealTheFallen10 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:35:59 PM AEST
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| Not much to really...exept FREAKIN' COOL! |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:22:02 AM AEST
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I think it was quite good. Also comments like the one that was posted about this very negatively and we know which one that is, have no place here. Constructive criticism is fine, but put downs like that are pathetic.
Exellent job...... |
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Re: Professor Penguin
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:42:12 PM AEST
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i usually dont go for poetry like this, but the name eluded me! i just cant help but love PENGUINS! theyre so cute doncha think?
funny poem! liked it alot, it made a smile come to my face, wich is quite rare! thanks a bunch!
Tweek |
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