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still untitled
Contributed by
xoXOSaDiEOXox
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 12:17:04 PM in AEST
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I saw the fire in her eyes
Sparkling diamonds
Filled with lies
Her tongue was black
Her heart was raw
Her mind like clockwork
Her word was law
Her dress was neat
Her watch on time
Eagle eyed
Ready to commit any crime
A pristine face
An innocent look
A concealing mask
That hid a crook
She carried a pistol
In her bag
Her smirk was evil
That of a hag
Wherever she went
A starry-eyed man followed
Fallen for her beauty
In which he wallowed
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2005-10-18 12:17:04]
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Re: still untitled
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by absolutspin on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 01:07:37 PM AEST
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| it's not bad...it's pretty right on with how easily some people are amused...or enchanted...been there got over that |
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Re: still untitled
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:59:15 PM AEST
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I would title it Bewitched.
Wherever she went
He had to follow
A slave to her beauty
Her soul so hollow |
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