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Darkened Room
Contributed by
unforgiven
on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:49:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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In this quiet, black room I sit,
Thinking of what once was.
The moonlight catches the glint,
The tears flowing down my cheeks.
Now that I think it all through,
I see where I went wrong.
It always happens that way,
Always too late when you realise.
I fell hard for you too soon,
You said my name and I became lost.
I thought we meant more,
Guess I should have asked you.
You became the light in my eyes,
The reason for my joy.
You mended my broken heart,
No reason to cry any more.
Then you started to drift,
No longer answered my calls.
I watched with terror filled eyes,
You disappeared from my view.
How dare you look for an casual thing,
Why did you not say?
Was I that overbearing on you,
You couldn't stop me and explain?
So now I'm left to wonder,
Where you've gone and how you are.
While I beat myself up inside,
For showing you my heart.
I sit in this darkened room,
What was once filled with light.
I sit, stare and think,
Wondering if it will ever be light again.
Copyright ©
unforgiven
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2005-10-18 06:49:55]
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Re: Darkened Room
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:09:33 AM AEST
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I think we've all been there, just realize it'll be hard but you can move on, and once you do, that room will start to gain light again. Best wishes for the future. Great Write.
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Re: Darkened Room
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:08:12 AM AEST
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Sad poem, but I enjoyed it.
Brandin |
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Re: Darkened Room
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:13:57 AM AEST
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| i agree...it will be hard but there will be light again...untill then..i've got a candle you can have..and some matches too. sad but great write. |
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Re: Darkened Room
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:54:41 PM AEST
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| He may have gone but he filled your darkened room with light for a while and helped you to feel again.Look forward for a new light to share and enjoy life with, Ros |
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Re: Darkened Room
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:13:20 AM AEST
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great poem so much emotion my heart goes out to you for i have been through the same and it takes a long time but things do get better. you cant see it now but the light will shine in your heart again best wishes to you
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Re: Darkened Room
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by tWiStLe on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:38:13 PM AEST
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| I luv dis one becks! =] ur writing is juz like u - beatifull and a gift! *kisses* |
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