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Stronger than you think
Contributed by
RedDrops
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:38:12 AM in AEST
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Hovering over my shoulder
Every second of every day
They wonder
When will she screw up?
When will she fall?
I'll prove you all wrong
I'll never break
I'm stronger than you think I am
I can take your critisism
Throw it at me, slam it hard
You'll se, I'll still be standing
With my chin up high
And my stereo blaring
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RedDrops
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Re: Stronger than you think
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:07:56 AM AEST
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Nice write. It was well put and I just know you will hold your head up high. :-) Thanks for sharing
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Re: Stronger than you think
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:46:26 AM AEST
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This is a great write. Keep your head up high and keep that stereo blaring.
Be well,
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Re: Stronger than you think
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:57:39 AM AEST
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Loved it! Me, too! In your face, world!
I was tickled pink when I discovered no one had taken on the signature of "enigma." For my first thirty-two years I struggled to belong. It wasn't a square peg, round hole, thing. I wasn't even a peg. I broke loose. In the beginning I was a bit obnoxious, a "Self-"defense thing. Now, I'm about to the, live and let live, stage. I don't bother looking over their shoulder, and I'm pretty indifferent to their looking over my shoulder...I baffle them...they can't explain me...I reason with them...they seem to understand the validity of my perspective...but, then they just go back to their comfort zone, as if they hadn't heard a thing...
I once described it this way: There is a whole community of creatures with wings that only knew to walk. Walking was the understood thing. One person was always restless, asking questions and wandering about. In his wandering, he discovered a cliff. Out beyond the cliff, in the open spaces were creature just like him. They were flying. Over and over again he would go back to the community and tell them they were meant to fly. They tolerated him, but that was about it. Finally, tired of going back and forth and not being listened to, he jumped. He no longer returns to the community of walkers. He is content with soaring.
One thing: I unrelentingly and uncompromisingly determined my path by tenaciously seeking Truth, Wisdom, and Beauty, with the understanding that when these three are in balance, there is Love.
It is quite conceivable you are stronger than even you can imagine.
blessings,
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Re: Stronger than you think
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:14:50 AM AEST
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Defiant to the end eh? Sounds like me :P
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Re: Stronger than you think
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by redtempest13 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:23:09 AM AEST
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Great write. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Stronger than you think
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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Very nice... Keep up living the same way you do now and I will be glad to talk to in... say 10 years from now... Nobody wants to fail, nobody wants you to fall, it's all in your head...
Good luck,
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