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Silent Wings
Contributed by
redtempest13
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:53:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My past is like soft silent wings,
They seem to me of many things,
My heart is old,
Or so I’m told,
My soul is weak,
As that I seek:
A love so true,
To fight the blues,
But silent wings they beat away,
My hopes and dreams and all I say,
I’m in a room that has no doors,
Nor windows, nor floors,
I’m in a house that has no roof,
Nor walls, nor proof,
In this house my secrets lie,
And there they’ll stay until I die,
When silent wings bring them gone,
And Death sings my whole life’s song.
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redtempest13
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Re: Silent Wings
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 04:09:17 AM AEST
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Nice write. I enjoyed that.
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Re: Silent Wings
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:52:19 AM AEST
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This poem really spoke to me. I loved your use of words here. This is a great piece.
Be well,
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Re: Silent Wings
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 11:07:53 AM AEST
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Wow...excellent write.
Nicely done.
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