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Who Am I?
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:36:35 PM in AEST
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Why is this happening?
Why can’t I see?
‘Cause no one really knows who I am
…Not even me
‘Cause my life is so secret
And I try to hide so much
I never let anyone in
Cause I could never do such
I’m losing myself
In this mess of a life
I really need some help
To get away from all this strife
I‘m gradually slipping away
From everything that I hide
I distrust everyone I know
So I just hide my feelings deep inside
So what should I do now?
Where can I go,
To get away from this life
That I’d rather not know?
There’s no place for me
I feel so lost and alone
So…who am I?
If I don’t even have a home?
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2005-10-17 20:36:35]
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:41:48 PM AEST
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A lot of people feel this way, myself included, so I'm going to be a hypocrit lol, if you think your supressing your life, stop, its hard, I know, but the only way out is through. Start opening up, little by little, you'll start to realize where your place is. If you never trust anyone, it'll only get worse, it'll be hard, I garentee it, but you can't keep hiding, it'll just get worse, and you'll just hurt yourself. I hope it all works out, great write.
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Re: Who Am I?
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by shaggy2468 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:51:31 PM AEST
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| i thought it was so sad, the weird thing was i used to feel that way too, then i got help through the church. so i will tell you this never ever give up because there is a light at the end of the tunnel. I WILL PRAY FOR YOU OK |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Sae on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:05:45 PM AEST
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| thats sad :( I feel like this 2. I know it's hard to take advice from people, because it doesn't seem right. All i can say is be strong, and remember u r not the only one that feels this way. Good job writing this :) |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:06:16 PM AEST
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awww... you have a home with me!! well, not literally, but you know what i mean. lol. sad, but teriffic write, i really enjoyed that one!! and i know how you feel! believe me, i do. but it was a great write, i liked it very much, keep up the great work!!
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Re: Who Am I?
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:01:22 PM AEST
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Good write-
Sometimes it is best to be who you want to be then you will know who you are[
I lost myself some time ago-
Most of the time I do not like that which I have become-
Joe |
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