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A smoke full of wish
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:29:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hooves to dust
quick as wind
the flying speed of
freedoms breeze
wraps this body in
the unimaginable.
Oh what possibilities
fall from above,
like god tears of
acid rain
burn the very heart of me
intoxicating with
holy smoke.
The breath of god,
stolen from the Earth,
the glorious green
we breathe in
we breathe out
and send out a spell
to cascade upon the land
nothing more than possibility.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2005-10-17 20:29:18]
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Re: A smoke full of wish
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by remote on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:00:03 AM AEST
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Re: A smoke full of wish
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:50:21 AM AEST
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Hmmm...rather abstract, but I kind of like it. It seems in the moment, and leaves the reader reflecting on the hidden meaning...
Keep up the writes: )
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