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Emptiness is dwelling while the alcohol is swelling
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:17:22 PM in AEST
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Scarred, Frayed and totally betrayed
Trying to gain back myself
From all the deseption you have felt
I can only hope you still think about what was
You gave my heart that jolt, that buzz
Have you erased me? Replaced me?
You've defaced me
I bore it all open to you
I showed you all that I've got
have you given me even a second thought?
Dreaming demons is what I've fought
"Anyone I've ever loved I've chased away,
And anyone I've ever let inside becomes too afraid"
Words of a good man
I'm just a punk rawk fan
Scream in my ear
By the way pass me another beer
Alcohol to the end
Is what I turn to in dispair
A lonely girl, her bottle her friend.
Doctors say "Yup soberphobias what she's got"
Depression leaves the soul distraught
My life is a series of blackened days
exactly like the one before
That momentarily break of black you brought is no more
Kate Ecklund
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Re: Emptiness is dwelling while the alcohol is swelling
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by little_genna on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:25:13 PM AEST
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U've probably heard it before but you wont find all the comfort you need at the bottom of a bottle. Though I do know what you feel, as I have felt it and still do. Ive got my 'happiness' but i still have many demons that i fight on a daily basis. I hope you find the strength to battle your demons...this is a very good poem tho so dont waste a talent..
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Re: Emptiness is dwelling while the alcohol is swelling
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:54:12 PM AEST
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ah i swam in that bottle for years i hope you learn to float not drown
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by nail-to-the-head on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:26:06 PM AEST
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i used to have trouble with my drinking(and drugs), i have now gone straight edge and with learnin self control i have become a better person. its hard to overcome, but do it for yourself. nothing is impossible! stay strong! x
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Re: Emptiness is dwelling while the alcohol is swelling
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:28:20 PM AEST
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Good poem to relate too-
A bitter kiss upon the lips and the soul-
Drinking will take everything away and give nothing in return-
Find a sober thought and hold on to it with each day that passes-
"Been There and Done That"...
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Re: Emptiness is dwelling while the alcohol is swelling
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:48:54 PM AEST
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I know how you are feeling and alcohol sounds like the answer just like i think suicide and cutting are my answers but it won't get you anywhere and i hope you learn to get past it... demons are so hard to fight when you don't want them gone..
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