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Depression
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:34:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Stuck in between living and dead
Visions of failure all stuck in my head
Unsure of direction, and what’s the right way
Painful reaction in words that I say
Feeling alone and unloved and in pain
Scars eating alive at the man that remains
Will I weather this storm that is set inside me
Will I be a better man for it, will the clouds part so I can see
Filled with hurt, and filled with doubt
I need to get this darkness out
Filling my mind and heart with sadness
Sinking back into depression and madness
Losing control of my heart and my soul
Watching the pain and the stress take it’s toll
As I wallow in pity and tears fill with rage
As I once again write this sad tale on this page
Take all this cancer that rages inside
And throw it away, and give back my pride
Try to move forward and not look back
But my heart has been damaged, and I await a new attack
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darkscorpio
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2005-10-17 09:34:10]
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Re: Depression
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:58:11 AM AEST
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| Great write,I kind of feel the same,only I'm a woman. |
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Re: Depression
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by thumper on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:32:25 AM AEST
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This is an excellent expression of depression. It grabs you by the ass and drags you down to the depths of Hell. Sorry, got carried away. I liked the way you expressed this. Very descriptive. I look forward to more of your writes.
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: Depression
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:35:39 AM AEST
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Aw, michael, don't worry, I know it hurts now, but your going to find someone new, and you'll have a happier life, that your happy in aswell. Best wishes for the future. Great write I loved it.
-Cassy |
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