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when you go
Contributed by
jheng
on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:23:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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when you go ....
i will be lonely
for i shall be losing a friend.
when you go ...
i will be sad
for you are my inspiration.
when you go ...
i will cry
coz you've been a part of me.
when you go ...
i will mourn
coz i am in love with you.
so, for now ... go
while i still have the courage
while i can still pretend
& hide my tears.
go ...
before i change my mind
& ask you to stay
forever ...
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jheng
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2005-10-17 09:23:14]
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Re: when you go
(User Rating: 1 )
by Angelochek on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:17:51 AM AEST
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Nice write, might be little un rhymed at parts but other than that good job!!!!!!
Keep on writting..... |
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Re: when you go
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by Kazzy1231 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 12:11:21 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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