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My Autumn
Contributed by
thumper
on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:28:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Pre-dawn. I step out on my porch
and shiver
The morning air is heavy with dew
and crisp
I breathe deep the earthy aroma
and sigh
Ears alert for an anticipated sound
finally rewarded
As gaze turns upwards to behold noisy geese
pointing south
Trees are showing twinges of shimmering golds
flaming reds
Squirrels are frantically burying hordes of food
to survive
It's October and Fall is here
I'm estatic!
Anticipation for the changing of seasons
delights me
So, for now, I just want to enjoy
my Autumn!
Copyright ©
thumper
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2005-10-17 08:28:04]
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Re: My Autumn
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:55:11 AM AEST
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such a nice thinng to read since my favorite season is fall.today was the first day that i could see my breath it was awsome my fav part of this is when you were talking about the gease i love them there so cool
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Re: My Autumn
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:54:03 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, serene write.
Here in Arkansas we are still having some Summers days or warm like Summer. It gets cool at night but exceptionally warm days.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Autumn
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:33:04 PM AEST
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A great descpritive write. Autumn is filled with those magical colours, falling leafs ah the wonders. A wonderful write. Keep penning.
*hugs*
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Re: My Autumn
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful! Though I could see through your descriptive words, I do wish I could've seen through your eyes. Must be awesome.
Take care.
David |
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Re: My Autumn
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by moon_light on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 08:47:16 AM AEST
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how butifull i know how you feal fall is the best. keep up the good work. love ya!
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Re: My Autumn
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by candysears on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 02:34:52 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful write...I love fall and winter...Best time of the year..
Beautiful,beautiful write....God Bless! |
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Re: My Autumn
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by Spike on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:15:11 AM AEST
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I'm there with you, just a trace of Summer to your right...
Love the rich descriptions, the clear and vivid imagery. Lucky you!
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