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are you strong enough
Contributed by
blessedangel
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:27:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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ARE YOU STRONG ENOUGH?
Tears of rage I cannot fight
I’d be the last to help you understand
Are you strong enough to be my man?
Nothing’s true and nothing’s right
So let me be alone tonight
Cause you can’t change the way I am
Are you strong enough to be my man?
Lie to me
I promise I’ll believe
Lie to me
But please don’t leave
I have a face I cannot show
I make the rules up as I go
It’s try and love me if you can
Are you strong enough to be my man?
When I’ve shown you that I just don’t care
When I’m throwing punches in the air
When I’m broken down and I can’t stand
Will you be strong enough to be my man?
Lie to me
I promise I’ll believe
Lie to me
But please don’t leave
Copyright ©
blessedangel
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2005-10-17 06:27:37]
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Re: are you strong enough
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:56:54 AM AEST
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| i like this great write |
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Re: are you strong enough
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by thumper on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:25:35 AM AEST
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First off, welcome to YPDC. This is a very friendly place to be. ;o) I enjoyed reading this. Hope to read more of your writes.
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: are you strong enough
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:14:17 AM AEST
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Hey, welcome to YPDC. Well written, I liked the structure you put this in, with the rhyming and all. Don't believe lies, no one is worth that. You're worth more than that.
Take care.
David |
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Re: are you strong enough
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 10:10:03 AM AEST
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| awsome write..i read your latest write too so i thought i would stop by and read the other one you spoke of...this is a great write.. welcome to ypdc. |
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