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relflection
Contributed by
spazz911
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:10:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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heartstrong and heartbroken
blinded by pain
look and the mirror and cry out again
lost in translation
my true self inside
despair neverending...
where can i hide
im locked in with myself
a battle of blood
cannot hide from my soul
it pays the penance above all else
blackened mirror so i cannot see the reflection
it is haunting my nightmares
yet they all still came
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2005-10-16 22:10:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: relflection
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:24:51 PM AEST (User
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good write, kc. i liked it- dark and deep. very good. just a lil mistake is 'look and the mirror and cry out again' supposed to be 'in the mirror'. sorry, it was bugging me, but otherwise it was a good write, keep up the good work, kc. and can we hide together?? lol. keep it up!
~sprints
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