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All Alone
Contributed by
fredsmith
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:47:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All Alone
I’m the one they deny,
Wishing I was dead.
I ask them all why,
For my name is Fred.
A friend is what I desire,
It’s all I ask for.
Someone I can admire,
There is nothing more.
Thy don’t seem to care,
What did I do wrong.
Why did I even dare,
No longer am I strong.
I’m all alone,
My life seems a lie.
At night I moan,
As I start to cry.
There is nothing I can do,
I can’t take any more pain.
Listen to I’m through,
I’m going insane.
I begin to mope,
They gave me the blame.
As I tie the rope,
My body he can claim.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-10-16 18:47:43]
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Re: All Alone
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:34:01 PM AEST
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i loved the rhyming in it it was outstanding
i feel like all is my fault some times too but dont forget its not always your fault just some people dont know how to say they've made a mistake
amazing poem |
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Re: All Alone
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:21:12 AM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: All Alone
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by Kazzy1231 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 03:58:34 PM AEST
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| Please check out some of my poems! |
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