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Dying Perfectly
Contributed by
merry
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Breathing brings in thought
Stilled by inner language
Sought out in silent moments
When death is close at hand
Skulking in blue shadows
Beyond a human touch
Giving life to ending sentences
Drawing last breath
Finding flawless symmetry
The art of dying perfectly
Still fears and uncertainty
Softly whisper the words good-bye
Forever disappearing
Copyright ©
merry
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2005-10-16 15:21:00]
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Re: Dying Perfectly
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:41:20 PM AEST
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| this is short i kinda wanted it to be longer because it was drawing me in perfectly i think this is a killer dark poem nice job |
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Re: Dying Perfectly
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 03:42:20 PM AEST
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I sure hope this just temporary depresion and not a goodbye.
I know you have been told many times how talented you are...can one more time hurt?
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Re: Dying Perfectly
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 08:51:38 AM AEST
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Sad but well done.
huggs,
emy |
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