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The Magic
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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All my life
I've been looking for the magic
yes I'm searching
looking for the magic.
Like a buccaneer
I am looking for the treasure
but there is nothing happening
so there is very little pleasure.
Fantasize all day
that I've found the magic
at night I cry
cause there is nothing
and it oh so tragic.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-10-16 14:35:35]
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Re: The Magic
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:44:02 PM AEST
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Awww...that last stanza is especially emotive. Everyone's time comes eventually, as long as you're open to possibilities. Hang in there!
Scorp. |
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Re: The Magic
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:52:54 PM AEST
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| This reads like a song, and if you could put this to some sort of melody i wouldn't be at all surprised. The story you've depicted here only makes me hope that you keep on looking and eventually karma should kick in down the line. Nice write |
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Re: The Magic
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by remote on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:22:41 PM AEST
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"Endless Search" by (American Indian poet) Alonzo Lopez
"Searching, forever searching.
Looking, but never finding.
Day and night, my eyes roam the world.
Searching, not knowing how to end.
This search for myself." |
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Re: The Magic
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:33:27 PM AEST
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Don't give up.....keep on fighting..
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Re: The Magic
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:06:34 AM AEST
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I feel ya, my friend.
I think I almost found it once but obviously I was wrong.
If ya find it let me know.
Very good writing as always.
luv, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Magic
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by Zee on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:21:17 AM AEST
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Even I am in search of love, hope we all get one soon! very nicely written!
Zee |
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