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all casual and red dressed
Contributed by
classicfailedhero
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:20:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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you see me all red hand and sucked, wrapped in genteel inequalities
at all its best spiralling, mindful opinion are weak
object to the unseen, love the unheard
trailing through the air, ghosts of a very select few
they are my own stigma, but the truth being
they are just simply not apperent
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2005-10-16 09:20:33]
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Re: all casual and red dressed
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by Shorty_88 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:56:33 AM AEST
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Excellent write and definately a peom you should be proud of.
Your first two verses represented to me the pressures and stereotypes that we feel are placed upon us.
I think your flow was great and your peom is really interesting. It is definately different to what i thought it would be about after reading the first two lines.
Keep up the great poetry and i look foward to reading more from you.
Kindest Regards, Tara |
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Re: all casual and red dressed
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:49:27 PM AEST
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| actually this isnt that bad in fact it really good i dont read poems like this alot not many people are good at them but you got talent i loved it |
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