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autumn is here
Contributed by
perfectly_flawed
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:29:31 AM in AEST
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Days and nights fly like leaves on an autumn day, getting lost with the wind and each other.
Carried along with every single breath of air in your lungs making them dance to put on show for the bear trees.
Dead performers dance through the sky leaving traces of laughter just before the haunt of winter air.
Dead leaves we all are filling the space between here and there letting death be the winter air.
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Re: autumn is here
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by classicfailedhero on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:43:01 AM AEST
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| i liked this poem for it's dreamy appraoch it meant no harm and unlike most of the poems posted here there was no hate or if there was i didn't care to see because i was caught up in the beauty of it |
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Re: autumn is here
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:03:10 AM AEST
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| Nice poem! The Autumn is definitely one of my favorite seasons....after winter!. |
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Re: autumn is here
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:51:46 PM AEST
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what a nice poem i like fall my fav. season
this is the first poem ive read about fall i loved it it was really good i hope to read more like this one |
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Re: autumn is here
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:40:59 AM AEST
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| Yay for autumn! |
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Re: autumn is here
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:17:05 PM AEST
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i love the imagery that you used here, it was beautiful with a hint of sadness and i think that's what makes it even more beautiful. praise is all i can present here. wonderfully written!
~karis~ |
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