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Let Me Love You
Contributed by
Babyjay
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:06:55 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Everytime I turn around,
I find my heart in peices on the ground.
I am tired of being hurt.
I am tired of you treating me like dirt.
Open you eyes so you can see,
How much you and your love meam to me.
I love you with all of my heart,
Which you are slowly tearing apart.
I love you so much!
You're just to blind to see.
You're blinded by what the other use to do,
But that's them and not me!
I will never hurt you!
I will always be true!
So open your beautiful eyes
And let me love you!
Copyright ©
Babyjay
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2005-10-16 03:06:55]
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:47:04 AM AEST
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I can relate to this one but the my ex was the one fooling around, not me.
good write and I hope yours turns out different.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by RickShaw on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 05:08:28 AM AEST
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Very nice poem your husband is a lucky man give him one more chance then dump him.
You should show him this poem |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by jheng on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:09:22 AM AEST
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| great write, i can truly relate with your poem |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:29:30 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this. one of my ex's from a long time ago used to do the same thing to me. ....... so i dumped him!..........i never really cared for him though. so i was able to just dump him with out any problams. ..........besides him calling me for the next 2 months of my life ...crying!.......... he was never special enough to write a poem about. .......... i guess that's why you haven't ended it with your husband. .......you love him too much........just tell him how you feel or show him this poem........ things should get better for you................well nice write........hope things get better.............
good luck
~amber~ |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:30:49 PM AEST
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| *problems.......(i spelled that wrong.......typo) |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:53:27 PM AEST
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Great write, I've been accused before, it'll work out. Great write.
-Cassy |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:39:51 AM AEST
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| so beautiful and so sad... |
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