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caught between a rock and a hard place
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:59:51 AM in AEST
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I lost you in the translation
Love went one way and hate another
Yet here we stand in strange connection
Not quite friends but always my lover
How to solve my contradiction
Filled with hypocracy and lies
Who wrote this heart breaking fiction?
Was it the demon you see in my eyes?
How do I reach to one so far
The words of encouragement fell to the wayside
As I die in the back of a burning car
Thje car that had helped me run but not hide
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Re: caught between a rock and a hard place
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:16:04 PM AEST
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omg Sophie, this was your best yet. Powerful yet tidy.
I'd say I liked the first stanza best, but I like it all so ***** much....
How do I reach to one so far
The words of encouragement fell to the wayside
As I die in the back of a burning car
and i really do like this part:
I lost you in the translation
Love went one way and hate another
Yet here we stand in strange connection
Not quite friends but always my lover
and this part:
Who wrote this heart breaking fiction?
Was it the demon you see in my eyes?
hehehe like i said i love it all.
And I miss you, Sophie. *gives you a huge hug*
I am worried about you, though I try not to. I really want to talk to you...
Hugs, love,
Lane |
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Re: caught between a rock and a hard place
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:38:27 AM AEST
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| That is an awesome poem, reminds me of the angst and the pain I felt with the dessolving of relationships in the past. Great wright! |
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