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Hijack Me
Contributed by
Rasputin_the_Second
on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:25:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Pull on that blood-stained shirt
Rip a hood down over your face
Yes, down, yes, further, cover those sickly eyes.
Cover your personality
Cover your hopes and dreams
Cover your soiled hands
Just surrender
Walk down the street with your accomplice
Rip a bullet through his body
Yes, through, yes, further, again and again
Cover the money bag
Cover your greed
Cover your inner tears
They dried many years ago
When you surrendered
Now you're naked in the bed
That girl that warms your body is a monster
You created
Now you're crying in your pillow
That girl is walking out the door
You're all that's left
You're all that's left
Cock another round
Cock another smirk
Put that gun to your head
Cock
Just kidding
Put that gun to his head
Cock
I'm winning
And if you drink another beer
Maybe It'll scorch away the flame
And if you scream a little louder
You'll go deaf
And if you live a little longer
Your sword will make you stronger
You'll never have to face another death
Never have to Smell my rancid breath
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Re: Hijack Me
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:55:43 PM AEST
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| this is such an awsome hate poem it rocked i really admire your work in this subject this is my favorite kind of poetry to read and this is one of my favs nice write |
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Re: Hijack Me
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by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:09:36 PM AEST
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Well done poem. I like how it flows, though I think I like the topic better. Doh.
Keep going! |
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Re: Hijack Me
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by Sae on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 01:18:52 AM AEST
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| Nice job writing this! |
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Re: Hijack Me
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:33:06 AM AEST
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| Very intence and great imagry! |
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Re: Hijack Me
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by Gypsy on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 05:03:30 PM AEST
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| awesome...sounds like the devil coaxing a soul he has stolen and tormented! Anger and stressed emotion, a wonderful write! |
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