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Little Boy
Contributed by
DreamPoetess
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:20:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My little boy had a little curl
Right on top of his head
When he slept, his lips curled up
I watched him in his bed
His little boy has a little curl
Right on top of his head
When he sleeps, his lips curl up
He watches him in his bed
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Re: Little Boy
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:33:32 AM AEST
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What an adore cute write. Short, simple and sweet. Well done for a 1st submission. Keep penning.
*hugs*
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Re: Little Boy
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:02:38 AM AEST
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I LIKE IT.......IT'S WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY DIFFERENT FROM ANYTHING I'VE EVER WRITTEN......I'M MORE INTO THE MORBID DARK POETRY. YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT MY WORK SOON IF YOU ARE INTERESTED.
GOOD WRITE....IT'S CUTE
~~AMBER~~ |
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Re: Little Boy
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:01:26 AM AEST
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It might be simple but it carrys a big puntch.
You've painted a luvly picture here.
luv it.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Little Boy
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:06:05 AM AEST
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I agree with all the foregoing commenters, short, simple but so cute and delightful and sweet..
Keep them coming.
Blessings
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Re: Little Boy
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:13:41 PM AEST
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This is cute! It's short and simple, but it's touching. The way you made it span two generations in so few words, but it was still sweet.
Keep up the writes, and just let your thoughts flow onto the page. It'll come...
Welcome to YPDC : )
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Re: Little Boy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:14:00 PM AEST
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awww this is cute i enjoyed reading it so
delicate and heart warming, nice write and style u have.
Ben |
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Re: Little Boy
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:30:56 AM AEST
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| Made me smile thanks |
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