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You Thought Wrong
Contributed by
Sewntogether
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 11:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You think you can do this
You thought you can get away with it
But you thought wrong
I'm stronger than you
And so much better
You tore me apart
You ripped me to shreds
And expect me to take you back
And trust you again
But I'm not stupid
To be hurt by you again
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Sewntogether
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2005-10-15 23:18:36]
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Re: You Thought Wrong
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by DreamPoetess on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
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angry writer, reader sad reading it. nice short poem, and a lot said.
Meagan |
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Re: You Thought Wrong
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by sarankrish on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:04:11 AM AEST
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| Good work ... |
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Re: You Thought Wrong
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by jheng on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:12:14 AM AEST
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| nice write. hope i also have the courage of not trusting those who hurt me |
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Re: You Thought Wrong
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:08:06 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of a poem I just posted called "Plaything". Nice write. |
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Re: You Thought Wrong
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by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:04:28 PM AEST
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"Fool me once, shame on me; Fool me twice, shame on you." -Proverb
I'm all for giving second chances. Because if they screw up again, I can mess them over with a nice, clean conscience.
But eh. I liked the feeling I got out of this, even though it was short and to the point. So much the better for an angry poem, though. Eh.
Good write! |
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