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all a blur
Contributed by
priss
on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:20:16 PM in AEST
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i'm dying
crying
trying
to remember how i got
this way.
it's all a blur
what occured?
i wonder as i stir
my next drink.
it's late
i hate
that i might not make
it to work tomorrow.
i'm undressed
my hair's all a mess
did i say yes
when you touched me?
Copyright ©
priss
... [
2005-10-15 22:20:16]
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Re: all a blur
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by ebooibo on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:26:48 PM AEST
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| that is hot yo wow and the end is crazy keep it coming please dont stop |
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Re: all a blur
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by xoXOSaDiEOXox on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 05:22:44 AM AEST
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| that's a class poem, good job!!!! |
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Re: all a blur
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by Spike on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 07:09:52 AM AEST
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sad one priss, but powerful and beautiful too.
Sober or not, wounded or not, don't we all ask at sometime in our lives what you so easily wrote in the opening stanza?
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