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Aren't the replacements hard to Find?
Contributed by
tigeram1
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Aren't the Replacements Hard to Find
Aren't the replacements hard to find?
Lost with love can be a thought for someone,
Like a rock laying in a pond with no mind,
But life would not be so easy to anyone.
Like an enourmous tree I stand stumped,
ground stable, with my branches spread,
Like a grandfather,to make a wish I have longed,
some times an act of God can shake the earth,
leaving me split and dropped over the hedge.
Laying by the slope, rolling down the hill,
I used to wake up lazy, up and early in the morning,
lunch and dinner, frivolous talks,
a good afternoon, a good night,
and then another bitter sweet morning sun.
But now the time has come to me like other things,
not to forget, but to continue on
to another grand scene.
Walking in the desert, I see a mirage over the dune,
Don't we seek water, when we get botherd by thirst,
And seek the knowledge of a saint
like a lifelong quest,
But what if my life has come into
an all new setting,
how do I even begin to ask myself,
How hard it is to replace the ones you Love?
How hard is it to be a rock in a pond,
when you have nobody else but your own fate
to stand on, being lost, till you can be found.
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tigeram1
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2005-10-15 21:15:13]
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Re: Aren't the replacements hard to Find?
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by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:20:41 PM AEST
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this is such a pretty poem its dark in a way because it speaks of death in way that is sad
i loved it |
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Re: Aren't the replacements hard to Find?
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by ebooibo on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:30:10 PM AEST
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| yeah i agree with every thing u said because i too lost alot of people family my brothers alot of people and damn it hurts so much wow when GOD comes things should be better but a very good nah a great poem |
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